Short commissions open and a story up for adoption

Alright, so that little hiatus is over, and I think I’m ready to jump back in again. So, first things first, I’m gonna go ahead and open back up my short commissions. The husband and I are gonna be moving into a new place at the end of the month, and any extra cash would be much obliged. Please note that the prices have changed since the last update, along with the payment. I’m going to start asking for payment up front, because I’ve had a couple close calls with people paying me after I’ve completed the work, and one person reneged on the deal entirely (but more on that in a second). At this point, I think you all know I’m good for commissions–I have yet to back out of one, and for repeat customers, I’ll most likely waive the up front requirement, but if I don’t know you yet, sorry, but that’s the way things need to be.

That said, here are the details on short commissions:

Short Commissions ***OPEN***

All payment due up front, following consultation and approval of plot outline.

2000-2500 word story (text only): 20 dollars

4500-5000 word story (text only): 40 dollars

Add images to a story of any length: 5 dollars

Now, I mentioned that someone reneged on a commission, which means I have a story all written that I would love to post…but since I wrote it for payment, I don’t really want to post it without being paid. So, we’re gonna go ahead and call the story an orphan–anyone want to adopt it? I’ll go ahead and put it up for 25 dollars (the story is 4,000 words long), and I’ll make any small changes to the story you might want. The major themes are bearification, bondage and humiliation, and involves this guy:

turning into this guy:

Want to find out how? Go ahead and contact me if you’re interested in adopting it. 

Thanks again for reading–hopefully I’ll have some new content up this week, but I’m not setting a schedule this month–I have a feeling things are going to be a bit too hectic, between holidays and moving, to let me stick to anything solid.

I really liked the slob elements, and was secretly hoping to see it wash over everyone… but thats just me. Keep up the great work, I love all your writing!

Ha, well….you never know?

I mean, Grant is still out there with the slobifier, and once Marcus and his new doggy daddy find him, who knows what the three of them might plan? 

Of course, that’s assuming the security computer doesn’t go nuts, and say, start drafting students into it’s forces to combat the slob wave.

I don’t know–suppose we’ll have to wait and see, won’t we? Regardless, I don’t think the threat has diminished much.

Hey, I was wondering if you have written or could recommend any well written gay erotic cheating stories.

uh…as in, gay guy’s cheating on each other, or straight guys going gay, or what? I’m not really into it myself, but there are a few I’ve seen. One I especially liked was “The Rings” by cigarmtl on the old Gay Male TF Archive. 

http://web.archive.org/web/20050212114444/http://www.maelstromx.com/trans/stories/story33.html

Don’t know if that’s what you’re looking for, but it’s the first thing that came to mind.

I know I gush about your work, a lot. Here’s more; I like the plot of this story a lot. I would read it as fanasy fiction! The erotic elements add, anticipation. Spudforth

Ha, “anticipation” eh? I’ve never heard it called that before 😉 

I’m glad you’re enjoying the plot though–it’s certainly the most involved (and also already the longest) thing I’ve ever written, so we’ll see if I can bring all these plot lines to bear on one another here somewhere.

Metawriting #4 – The Question of Fetish

There is something I have left rather untouched in these discussions thus far, which is the question of fetish. One reason I have neglected it is because, in many ways, it doesn’t really matter, as far as the genre is concerned. The MC/TF genre is that it can adapt itself to so many different fetishes, that part of what needs to be done, to understand it, is to dig past these rather superficial aspects to the core of what these stories do. However, this is, perhaps, not fair. While the genre itself is so adaptable to various fetishes, this is, I think, part of its appeal to readers. In addition, writers want to include fetishes in their stories, and I’m a firm believer that there are ‘good’ ways to do so. So, here, I want to address a few things regarding the addition of fetish to stories.

One of the first points to address is what I mean by fetish. After all, ‘mind control’ and ‘transformation,’ taken broadly, are both fetishes, but not in the way I’m using the term narrowly, here. Rather, I’m referring to the obsessions and sexual interests of the characters in these stories. To name a few of a very long list, we might include entries like ‘muscle worship’, ‘smoking’, ‘fetish gear’, ‘bondage’, raunch’, etc. However, rather than try and list out all of these fetishes and discuss each individually, it would be more helpful to understand the various ways one might incorporate these fetishes with the genre we’re discussing, so here are the primary ways, I believe, fetishes can be incorporated into MC/TF stories.

  1. The MacGuffin – Discussed in the last chapter, the MacGuffin is some object, often unexplained, which allows the plot of a story to advance. It is often the thing sought by the protagonists and antagonists, and the vehicle of change (like Tristan’s pendant, in City of Bears). More often than not, writers telegraph the fetish focus of their story in the nature of the MacGuffin. Is it a piece of clothing? The story is going to be oriented towards some sort of gear fetish. Is it something one might derive erotic pleasure from, like a tobacco product or a dildo? If so, we probably know what the changee will be doing for the rest of the story. That said, not all MacGuffins are obvious–see the numerous stories with the ubiquitous magic amulet/ring/watch (though if it is a watch, there will be at least one instance of stopped time somewhere in the story). These generally signal a fetish neutral story, or point to some fetish not easily represented by a MacGuffin (incest, for example). I fear I sound like I’m ridiculing this device–I’m not, really. Goodness, I use it often enough in my own stories. Rather, it can be a useful trigger to let the reader know what they’re in for, and can also be used as a ‘bait and switch’ tactic in a farcical story. Regardless, this technique is so ubiquitous that more often than not, writers rely on it too much. It can do little more than set the stage–something still has to happen beyond this to make the story interesting.
  1. Fetish as a Means of Domination – Similar to the MacGuffin, this fetish again helps move the story along by being a vehicle of change and domination, however, the MacGuffin is Dom/Sub neutral–in this second case, it is wielded by a particular individual against another to render them into a submissive, changeable state. One of the more common fetishes I use for this purpose is ‘Musk’, which I admit, is a bit of a crutch. (I really should stop having guys overwhelm each other with their stink in every story I write, but eh, I like it too much to quit now.) Bondage is another common fetish used for this purpose, as is smoking.
  2. Fetish as a Means of Submission – The flip side of the second, we might think that these would mirror each other. Sometimes they do, and sometimes they don’t. In fact, what might set this apart from (2) is that submission, in this context, can be open ended, rather than directed towards a specific dominator. In many ‘top to bottom’ stories, for example, many victims experiment with toys at first, fucking or sucking variously sized dildos for a few pages, before hunting down their master. This fetish for toys helps condition their submission without a dominator being actively involved. Again, this can also overlap with the MacGuffin, but does not always do so.
  3. Fetish as a Means of Humiliation/Dehumanization – This might appear, at first, to overlap with (3) but not every submissive is humiliated, and not every individual humiliated and dehumanized is necessarily rendered submissive. These fetishes, instead, are often meant as punishments for the characters that they are inflicted upon.  Watersports and scat are two I use for this purpose, primarily, but there are many others, especially quite a few AR fetishes.

Now, I’m sure there are a few categories I may have missed, but these are the ones which leap to mind. What’s important here is that while some fetishes fit better in some categories than others (for example, it’s hard to have a fetish MacGuffin when one’s fetish doesn’t have a tangible physical manifestation) most every fetish can be employed in any of these categories, but here’s the thing–it only works well if that fetish is being employed to further the underlying MC/TF plot, instead of that fetish just being thrown in there for fun. This is a distinction I’ve made, called “kink-for-plot” and “kink-for-kink” with the first being infinitely more useful than the second.

Here’s the main reason this is important–most people who read MC/TF stories don’t come for the fetish, they come for the underlying themes I’ve outlined in the last two entries, that two by two grid of me/them and dom/sub. The fetishes we use as writers reinforce those and make them original. On the other hand, you can throw in as much fetish as you want, but if it doesn’t play into the underlying plot structure, it’s only going to bloat your story and turn people off who don’t enjoy that fetish. Here’s my test: can someone who isn’t into this particular fetish I’m using still enjoy this story? I like to think, that for most of my stories, it’s a yes. While I’m sure there are plenty of people who can’t get past the nastier parts of my stories, I’ve gotten any number of comments from people who thought they would be turned off by them, but who instead found it intriguing when I wrote it. Does this mean I’m just really good at making guys smearing shit on themselves sound nice? Probably not–but if I deemphasize the ‘nasty’ and instead use it to motivate the themes of humiliation and dehumanization running through my story, the universality of the fetish category generally overcomes people’s reluctance to interact with it. 

This then, explains why I consider fetish to be a relatively minor concern–good fetish writing comes from correctly employing the underlying aspects of MC/TF plots–not from writing the fetish stuff ‘well’. This isn’t to say that there isn’t good and bad ‘pure’ fetish writing–there certainly is. But without the fundamentals, it doesn’t matter how well it’s written in and of itself.

The end of NaNoWriMo–now what?

Alright, I know it’s only the 28th, but I’m gonna go ahead and call an end to my NaNoWriMo this year. I hit my goal a few entries back, and came to an alright stopping point on City of Bears for the moment, plus I’m not entirely sure where things are going from here. I’m gonna put it on a (hopefully) short hiatus, and come back to it in a bit. 

In the meantime, I’m kind of curious to know what sort of posts all of you would like to see here. I’ve been at this for a few months now, and have tried a few different kinds of posts, but I’m not really attached to any particular schedule moving forward. Regardless, whatever I post, it’ll probably be a bit of a mix, but if I hear that you really like (or don’t like) something, I’ll certainly pay attention. To recap, here are a few kinds of posts I’m thinking of continuing:

* Image captions (200-500 words)

* Image vignettes (around 2000 words)

* Metawriting posts

* Longer stories posted serially (like this last bout of NaNoWriMo) 

If there’s anything else you all would like to see, let me know, and I’ll think about it. Also, I’ll be opening up for short commissions again in the next few days, and long commissions sometime soonish (probably late December/early January). If you’re interested in reserving a spot/asking any questions about them, drop me a line here, or shoot me an email at wesley_bracken@yahoo.com.

NaNoWriMo Entry 20 – 11/27 (58,025/50,000 words)

Marcus took a few deep breaths, trying to calm down and relax. He was safe now, he didn’t have to worry about the virus getting him, but the next question was what were the two of them supposed to do now?

“So now what?” Marcus asked.

“Now? Well, I suppose we’re stuck in here fer the moment, until the computer recognizes that we’re both clean, ‘n lets us out. But I’m sure a little time alone wouldn’t do us any harm, boy.”

Boy. Jack had called him boy? Marcus knew he should have been grossly offended, but all he felt was…a shiver. A shiver running through his cock. He wanted to hear that again, hear Jack call him that again. “What…what did you call me?” Marcus asked.

“Huh?” Jack said, getting up from the table and walking around to where Marcus was standing, “Well, I called ya ‘boy.’ Did that make ya feel funny? Maybe make you feel a little…nice?”

He was so big. Marcus had never realized before just how damn big Jack was. He bet that for a guy that size, he didn’t have to worry about anything, he could probably protect someone from anything too. Yeah, wrapped up in those big, musky arms, Marcus would feel so safe and secure, and…and with that big cock of his, Jack could…could… “What…what is this? What did you do to me? That wasn’t…wasn’t a fucking antidote at all, what was that?”

“What the hell are you talking about boy? You’re talking crazy.”

Boy. There it was again, he loved being called that, he loved it when his daddy called him that. Daddy, yeah, Jack was big enough, strong enough to be a daddy, wasn’t he? To be his daddy…He looked over in the mirror, looking to see if something had changed, but Marcus couldn’t see anything different. He was short, sure, and a bit on the chubby side. His clothes didn’t really seem to fit all that well, in fact, the uniform shirt wasn’t hugging him right, and his kilt seemed too long. Hell, why was he wearing stuff like this anyway? He should be wearing stuff like his daddy was wearing, yeah, that’s what a boy should wear. As though they were responding to his thoughts, the clothes began to shimmer and squirm in the reflection, and a second later, Marcus saw he was dressed in a pair of grimy overalls and a flannel vest over them, and that looked right. That looked like something Daddy Jack would give him to wear. The bigger man pulled Marcus close then and the cub let off a sigh of relief. He felt so much better in his daddy’s arms, like all of his cares could just melt away. He just didn’t need to fight anymore, it was such a relief.

“Yeah, that’s it boy. We’re gonna be one big happy family, you, me and you’re nasty Uncle Grant.”

No…there was still something…Marcus knew something was wrong. He should just relax, should just let all of his cares melt away, but he knew…knew that he had to hold on, that something about all of this just wasn’t right, that Jack…Jack was his daddy, but he’d tricked him, done something to him. He pushed himself away from Jack and backed up, trying to find some remnant of himself, something about to be burned away, something to tell him what to do. He couldn’t trust him, he couldn’t trust him at all, and that was the truth. He couldn’t even trust himself right now…but there was something he could do, something he could do to make sure they could trust one another. “Computer,” Marcus said, “run program K9 conversion mental program on interrogation subject.”

“What the hell does that mean?” Jack said, “Boy quit fucking around and–” Jack started to say, but the panel in the wall slid open, revealing the glass pod, the metal tendrils snaking their way out and wrapping their way around Jack’s limbs. “Goddamn, you’re gonna fuckin’ get it! Fuckin’ tell it to stop, tell it to fuckin’ stop, boy!” The big redneck fought as well as he could, but the technology was stronger, yanking him back inch by inch into the pod, and he let out a holler of rage as the tendril found it’s way into his ass, allowing the other to insert itself into his mouth and down his throat, silencing him, and Marcus came closer.

“I’m sorry daddy, I’m so sorry, but I just…I just can’t trust you, daddy. But when you’re my dog, I’ll be able to trust you, I know I will, so don’t worry daddy, you’ll be a good doggy for your boy, and then we can go find Uncle Grant and we’ll all be happy together, right?”

The look of rage on Jack’s face didn’t release even after the computer started releasing the sedative into the system. Even after the helmet descended onto his head and the pod closed, Jack still struggled, though his fight was obviously lost, and even he knew it, as the helmet began programming him, warping his mind into that of a complete leather pup slave, utterly devoted to his boy, to protecting and serving him. Marcus pressed himself up against the glass, hugging it, hoping his daddy pup wouldn’t take too long to accept his programming. Still, he would probably be locked away at least for a night or two–maybe more, but then they would be together, and then Marcus would be able to trust him. He’d finally have someone devoted to him, who wouldn’t betray him, who he could love forever and ever, and who would love him back just as much, and his daddy wouldn’t be angry when he came out. He would be happy with Marcus–they would be so happy together.

As Marcus clung to the glass pod, as close to his daddy as he could get, he didn’t see the face in the small window in the door looking in at them. Matt looked at the young, redneck cub hugging the glass and decided he probably didn’t want to find out what had happened in there. In the next room over, however, he found what he was looking for–Terry–except he was also trapped inside one of those glass pods, and the door was sealed shut. He tried everything he could to get it open, but nothing would make it budge, until he heard a strange voice resound through the facility, “Quarantine lifted–scan complete, no viral outbreak detected.”

The door clicked, and Matt rushed inside, taking the chair and smashing it into the control panel on the side of the pod, the glass door opening and the tendrils retracting, Terry slumping out of the pod and into Matt’s waiting arms, and as fast as he could, he hauled the unconscious cub out of the building before any of the guards, quarantined by the system, could emerge from their quarters in the complex. Outside again, and now a fugitive on campus, Matt had no idea where to go. He needed to find Erikson, and quickly–he figured that the week on loan to him was going to disappear quicker than he might imagine. He thought, searching his own memories as well as those of his new body and history, and realized that the best place to go might be to where he worked as a bouncer–the Daddy’s Den. It wasn’t a great plan, but it was somewhere, and that would have to do. He hefted Terry up and started his trek across town, wondering if this nightmare would ever be over.

End: City of Bears 3: Arc 2 – Change or Be Changed

Next: City of Bears 3: Arc 3 – The Hunt for Erikson

NaNoWriMo Entry 19 – 11/26 (56,721/50,000 words)

He left the interrogation room to go see what required his attention. The communal cells were used for light security purposes–students who got a bit too drunk on campus, or for fights than might break out in the baths or in the tavern, but since it was the middle of the day, none of them should be in use at the moment. An unease was growing in Marcus’ gut as the day wore on–he was sensing that things were spiralling out of his control. Last night, leaving Clark and Doug together, he had felt confident that he had things under control, and now that he had a member of the resistance, he’d imagined things would be easy, but now he was beginning to feel his doubts and paranoia creep back in. He arrived at the cell and found two of his guards standing outside, looking a bit uneasy. “Alright, so what’s the problem?” Marcus asked.

“Sir,” the guard said, snapping to attention, “Officers 58 and 102, tasked with arresting Jack Wolfson, have returned Sir…unsuccessful. But…well, we had to…well, maybe you should just see for yourself Sir.”

Marcus walked past the guard, saw what was going on in the cell, and gasped. The two guards in the cell…well, he wasn’t even sure they were his guards anymore. He could tell that they had been his guards at one point, that was for sure, but it was only small details on each that remained the same, the high ‘n tight on one, the leather uniform stretched across the fat frame of them other one. However, neither of them seemed all that interested in what was going on, they were a bit too focused on each other. The first one, 58, had his arm lifted up over his head, and the second’s face was buried in his armpit, slurping away. Even outside the cell, Marcus could smell their combined musk, and it was making his stomach turn. “58 and 102, attention!” he barked.

The two guards reluctantly broke away and sluggishly came to attention, but it was obviously hard for them to maintain their focus on Marcus. “Yes Sir?” 102 asked in a husky voice.

Marcus took a moment to survey the damage. Both of his guards were now well into obesity, and it was clear that on his return trip 58 had simply burst out of his uniform, and 102 was well on his way to a similar fate. Both were covered in body hair and stank to high heaven, and Marcus knew it had to be the slob wave. “Report. Tell me what happened. How did you two change?”

The two guards looked at each other, “Changed…Sir?” 102 said, “We haven’t changed. We went to Jack Wolfson’s trailer with a warrant for his arrest, and we returned to report that he wasn’t there, in order to…to…” 102’s eyes rolled back, and it took Marcus a second to realize what was happening. He smelled it first–the stench of piss, and 58, eyes glazing over with lust, fell to his knees in front of 102, ripped open his pants and started lapping up the urine wherever he could find it.

“Attention,” Marcus said, but they didn’t even notice, “I said attention!” he shouted, but again, the two guards didn’t even bother, too lost in their filthy, sexual haze. He turned to the guards outside the cell and said, “I want the two of them reconditioned immediately.”

“That’s, well Sir, that’s part of the problem,” the guard said. “When they arrived back here, Sir, the computer recommended reconditioning. They were a mess Sir…and this, well, this is them, reconditioned. It had a minimal effect Sir, and they’re already, well…regressing.”

Marcus looked back at the two slobs in the cell, and saw that the guard was right. 58’s high ‘n tight was already growing out into a thick mane, and he looked the be even fatter than before, and the last glimmer of intellect was disappearing from 102’s eyes, as he snorted and grunted, little more than a pig, as he shot a load of sour smelling cum all over 58’s beard. The smells…Marcus couldn’t take it anymore, it was just overwhelming. “Alright, stay here, keep them under guard, until I can figure out what’s going on here.”

Marcus headed out of the communal cell block and back towards his control room. He needed an analysis of the footage of his officers as they crossed campus. Unfortunately, the trustees had denied his request to install cameras in all of the dorms and living areas on campus, but maybe he would be able to discern something about what had happened to 58 and 102, or at least know when it happened. That smell, he still couldn’t get it out of his nose, if felt like he was going to be carrying it around with him for hours. He needed a god damn shower, just being that close to those filthy fucks. Jack had to have something to do with all of this, he just had to, but what? He’d seen him slob Grant a few days ago, but that had been with some kind of raygun, and he hadn’t seen Jack use the device since, so it couldn’t be him doing all of this. Then again, if Jack wasn’t at his trailer, then where was he? That was his last recorded location, and the computer had been keeping tabs on him the entire time–where had he disappeared to? Marcus felt theory upon theory start piling up in his head, each more wild and crazy than the next, but his head was running wild. He had to know who was doing this. He had to know why. Was it Jack? Or was it the resistance making it look like Jack, to frame him? Or was it the trustees?

Back in the control room, he analyzed the footage and discovered a strange hole in his coverage on campus, as his officers walked down towards the trailer housing on campus, there was a gap of three seconds between one camera and the next, and it was in that gap–that single gap, that something happened…on the way to the trailer. He could see the changes start then, progress as the officers arrived at Jack’s trailer, searched the premises, and then returned to base, growing filthier and slobbier the entire way back, until they were unrecognizable, coming up the steps into the security building. A gap. One fucking gap that he didn’t know about, but someone else did. What happened in those three seconds? What could have done this?

“Sir, new location registered for wanted individual, Jack Wolfson,” the computer said suddenly, “Location, mobile, forecasting direction, approaching security services.”

“On screen,” Marcus said, and sure enough, there the fucking redneck was, hurrying towards the security building. Now what was he planning, and why in the hell had all of this caught Marcus by surprise? He was the one who was supposed to know what was going on here, he was supposed to be one step ahead, and here he was, playing catch up. “Have four guards intercept him. If he resists, subdue him. Take him to interrogation room four.”

“Understood, issuing orders now.”

Marcus watched on screen as a collection of guards hurried out of the building and approached Jack. To his surprise, Jack seemed to expect this and allowed them to take him into custody, following them handcuffed into the building. Marcus gave them a few minutes as he tried, hopelessly, to put all of this together in a cohesive picture. A resistance member, looking for information on Erikson and Tristan from the board of trustees. Did they have some plan, now that the campus was essentially headless? The defacto head of the board informing on the resistance at the cost of Clark’s life. He was obviously looking for power, was he planning all of this behind the scenes? Jack, the only other master left, now. He seemed like the most obvious culprit, but Marcus had no evidence that he was behind this, even if he was the greatest suspect, and if he was the culprit, why waltz right up here and surrender? Marcus hung his head in his hands, frustrated beyond belief, and that fucking smell! He still couldn’t get it out of his nose, it felt like it was stuck there somehow, and it kept breaking his concentration. On the screen, he saw that Jack had been escorted to the interrogation room. He must know something, and whether it was a trap or not, he needed to talk to him, and Marcus got up and returned to the interrogation bloc, letting himself into the room where Jack was waiting.

“Quite the welcome ya had ready fer me here,” Jack said, when Marcus came in, “Feelin’ a bit paranoid?”

“I don’t know,” Marcus said, “Should I be feeling paranoid? Considering the way the master’s students have been dropping like flies, I don’t think it’s a bad idea to be too careful.”

“Ha, well, by my count, I took out one, ‘n ya took out two. If anyone should be worried, I think it should be me. Look, Marcus, I ain’t here tah hurt ya, there’s somethin’ goin’ round campus, I know ya noticed it too. Ya notice everythin’ that goes on ‘round here.”

“Oh?” Marcus said, feigning ignorance, “And what might that be?”

“There’s somethin’ happenin’ tah everyone. They’re turnin’ intah fuckin’ slobs. I mean, I don’t really object, given some a mah inclinations, but well, there was somethin’ crazy about it, so I went diggin’ in some of Erikson’s old files–”

“Don’t bullshit me, the labs are locked down–you know that. No one has been able to get in or out without Erikson to open them up.”

“Yeah, but his office just has a plain old key, ‘n I can pick those,” Jack said, and for emphasis, released his hands from the cuffs the guards had put on him. They might be big, but they sure are nimble when I need ‘em tah be.” He grinned a bit wolfishly, and Marcus was beginning to worry that this could indeed be a trap. He needed to be more careful than ever before. “What I found was, well, turns out one a Erikson’s little pet projects might’ve had a bit of an accident.” Jack threw down a file folder onto the table he pulled from the back of his pants, and Marcus gingerly opened it up, revealing a collection of files about something called ‘Virus SL004.’

“Just give me the rundown. What’s it do.”

“It’s a slob virus, man. It turns guys into filthy pigs. Again, I’m not really complaining, but that’s my schtick,” he said with a laugh, “Turns out there’s an antidote that was accessible in the upper labs, before getting down into The Depths that are still locked off,” Jack said, and pulled out a small phial and set it on the table, “I already took mine, and I figured you might like one for yourself.”

“Oh no fucking way, how stupid do I look?” Marcus said, “This is all you’re goddamn doing. You released the virus, and now you want me to take an antidote?”

“I’m serious man, this is the only way you’ll be safe.”

“Bullshit. Why in the hell should I take your word in any of this?”

“Well, what other fucking explanation have you got?” Jack said, then stared at Marcus…are you…you know, you look a little…you haven’t been around one of the infected have you?”

“What the hell are you talking about?”

“You can smell it, can;t you? That’s the first sign, you can’t get their fucking stink out of your nose, and then you keep thinking about it, and then you start changing. You need to take this now, or it’ll be no help at all.”

Marcus felt like Jack had just read his mind into his deepest fears. He had been around 58 and 102…could it really be a virus? There was that three second gap, could they have encountered someone infected with the virus? No, there wasn’t even any evidence that this virus existed beyond Jack’s claims. Marcus had to get out of here, he had to. He walked to the door to leave and think, but as soon as he pulled on the door, he heard it lock down.

“Computer…computer open the goddamn door.”

“Due to evidence of a possible viral outbreak, this facility will enter quarantine level three until threat is confirmed or denied. All those possibly exposed are asked to remain calm and report any possible signs of illness to central command.”

“God fucking damn it,” Marcus said, “There’s no fucking outbreak!”

“There damn well is, and you fucking know it,” Jack said, “and if you’ve been exposed, this is you’re only fucking chance man. Once the changes start, there’s nothing you can do, and trust me, as much as I’d like to see you as a fucking slob, I’m doing you a favor here. We gotta stick together man, we goota, we’re the only ones left who can lead this fuckin’ campus anymore.”

“No, this can’t be fucking happening,” Marcus said, and looked at himself in the room’s one way mirror. He looked the same, didn’t he? He couldn’t really still smell the officers, it was just his imagination, or was it? His imagination and terror was running wild now, barely kept in check by the high tension nerves running through him. He looked at the phial, then at Jack, then at the door. Did this make sense? Was it really the most likely solution?

“How do I know you aren’t the one behind this?” Marcus asked, trying not to betray his panic, “How do I know you aren’t setting me up?”

“I suppose you don’t,” Jack said, leaning back, “But I don’t have to worry, I have my antidote. I guess the question is–are you going to trust someone for once in your life? Or are you really going to let your fuckin’ paranoia be the end of you? I’m tryin’ tah help ya Marcus, can’t ya see that? Why in the hell would I a come if all I had tah do is let ya get infected?”

It made sense, didn’t it? Marcus felt the terror rise in him. The smell was stronger now, he could almost taste it, or was it just Jack’s musk? He didn’t know anymore, he didn’t know what to do. He didn’t want to be a fucking slob like 58 or 102, he didn’t. But what could he do? He didn’t have time, if he waited, he’d be a slob in no time. He had to be infected, how could he not be? And if Jack was responsible for this, he wouldn’t have come, he would have just waited it out, waited until the entire security force was too far gone to do anything and then swept in to take control. He had to trust him, he had to, as terrifying as that was. He hurried over to the table, and with shaking hands, took the top off the phial and downed the contents in a few gulps, Jack just sitting there–grinning.