I am curious. When I see most redneck TF porn, it is always linked to sweat, raunch, and often piss or scat. Is it possible to have one without the other, and is it worth the effort? I know I have enjoyed all your redneck stories, even though piss and scat normally are turnoffs. So I am wondering if “clean” redneck can be good, and if you know any examples.

This is a good question, but it requires a bit of effort and explanation to answer effectively, so bear with me for a bit.

I have said before, in a previous metawriting post, that the eroticism of these stories is derived from what I call “triggers”. Without rehashing the original content of that post too much, the basic idea is that certain phrases, sentences, bits of dialogue, etc. are crafted in order to elicit an erotic response related to one or more fetishes the reader might have. The phrase can be quite general, in the hopes of hitting a broad swath of people–for example, a simple passage about a man masturbating would hit a broad swath of men and women who are “attracted to men”–or a trigger can be quite narrow and tailored, and hit a smaller number of people, often for greater impact, at the risk of alientating a larger number of people who might not respond to those particular fetishes–say, for example, the rather generic guy masturbating is now overweight, slobby, covered with piss, etc.–that appeals to a smaller section of people and pleases them more, at the cost of alienating everyone else. 

Still with me? Basically, fetishes and be mixed and matched at will by authors in order to specifically target an audience either broadly or narrowly, depending on what they want to do–that means, with just this in mind, of course we should be able to have a clean redneck story–but here’s the strange thing. I honestly have never seen one that I can recall. There are certainly redneck themed stories that de-emphasize raunch/slob themes, but in the fast majority of them it plays at least a small part. This seems to run counter to the expectation, and the reason is a bit strange.

Some fetishes are what I might call atomic fetishes, while others I might call compound fetishes. The distinction here is going to be a bit vague, but for our purposes, let’s think of atomic fetishes as those which are capable of standing alone, without requiring other fetishes to make sense. So, “homosexuality” would be an atomic fetish. “Muscle growth”, “weight gain”, “Masculinization” would also probably fall into this category. On the other hand, a compound fetish is understood as a collection of fetishes working together to produce a whole greater than the sum of the fetish-parts. “Pup Play” would be a compound fetish–containing elements of “bondage”, “power exchange”, “mind drain,” and “humiliation” which all work together to generate that compound fetish. You might be able to write a pup story without one of those–in fact, I can think of a few examples I might use–but the compound fetish itself tends to include those ideas more often than not.

So, is “Redneck” compound or atomic? It pretty obviously is compound, and that’s where our problem lies. I think a big part of the “Redneck” fetish is that it is cobbled together from a whole bunch of other fetishes, of which the atomic fetish, “Raunch” is most certainly one. Can you write a story without including that atomic fetish? Sure, in the same way you could have a story with a “Smart” redneck–but for most of the audience, this is going to run counter to their expectations. 

so, tl;dr:

1. Yes, it is possible, in theory, to construct a redneck story without slob/raunch elements.

2. Is it worth the effort? That’s a bit subjective. Depends on how much you want to see a story like that, I suppose.

3. Can “clean redneck” stories be good? I’m sure they can be, but I’m not sure they would satisfy someone with a general fetish for Rednecks. What I mean is, could it be good? Sure. Would it necessarily be satisfying to me/my audience? …Hmmm…jury’s out on that one still.

4. And no, I don’t have any examples really, though I’m sure they’re out there. This is the internet, after all, and Rule 34 always applies.

Hi. Just wanted to know if you could do a story either where a lab assistant uses a “failed” serum on his competition for top position to make the competition total dumb pigs or one where a high school football player uses hypnosis and magic to make his main competition for a scholarship slowly become a devoted, idiotic, 400lb pig slave. That’s all. Thanks.

I can certainly add those to my lists for sure, thanks for the ideas!

Coach Ray Gets Framed (Part 1)

Ray gave a start, and shook his head; he was falling asleep at his computer again, so it must be time to head home. He looked up at the clock in his office, in the high school locker room, and was surprised that it was already seven. He must have really dozed off there, for a while. Ray Montaigne was the head coach at River Hills High School, and he was one of the student bodies favorite teachers. He wasn’t quite in peak physical shape anymore, unfortunately–he was in his late forties, had a bit of a gut, but he could still run a nine minute mile, and bench press 200, so he wasn’t doing too badly.

Still, it was finally summer, if nothing else. He’d been nearly finished entering grades when he’d fallen asleep, and so he finished the last few, uploaded them to be processed, and then started packing up his things, happy to see this year in particular behind him at last. What a nightmare. No one had really recovered from what had been happening with Julian Porter, one of the computer science teachers, who had been systematically abusing the school’s athletes for years now. Ray was still furious with himself for never even noticing anything, but none of his previous students even remembered anything. If it hadn’t been for Noah approaching him in confidence, that afternoon, begging him to help–no one would have been the wiser at all. And now look at where they were–after Ray brought the abuse to the attention of the principal, he’d ordered Mr. Porter fired, but no one had seen Porter in days. He’d skipped town or run somewhere, and they were still searching for him, now months later. That hadn’t been the most disturbing part however–because not a few days later, Noah disappeared as well. It was assumed he had run away, though Ray and a few others suspected Mr. Porter had something to do with the boy’s disappearance. Still, no one knew anything for certain–Noah’s parents were an absolute mess, and Ray was too, though he couldn’t show it around his students. Other athletes had come forward, admitting that Mr. Porter had been abusing them as well, and Ray still couldn’t understand how no one had noticed anything in all of that time.

Just thinking about it was giving him a sick stomach. He put together his things, shut off his computer, double checked the lights, and left, happy to not have to see the place for a few months. Hopefully next year things would be better, for everyone. Especially Noah–Ray was really worried about him. He’d been so…strange when he’d told Ray what had been happening, almost like his tongue was fighting itself in his mouth, trying to keep the words from pouring out. Noah had told him Mr. Porter had him under some kind of control, but no one had believed him about that, no one other than Ray. It explained how Julian would have managed to get to Noah as well–if he had some kind of control over him that would explain a lot, but he hadn’t been able to find any sort of hard evidence. All he could hope was that they would find Noah and Julian soon, before he could do any more damage to anyone else.

He left the school and drove home. He’d gone through a messy divorce a few years back, but he’d at least managed to keep the house, even if he had to pay fucking alimony out the ass. He didn’t have any kids at least–he’s turned out to be sterile and not even that interested in kids, but she’d always wanted some. That was part of why she’d left, after she’d frozen some of her eggs years ago, and finally found a daddy for them she approved of. Already had pumped out two of them, last he heard. The house had always been too large for them, and he hated how big it was now–half the rooms were just storage at this point–but if he sold it, he’d have to give her a hefty chunk of the sale, so he might as well just sit on it, since it was almost paid off anyway.

However, when he got home that night, he immediately had the sense that something was off. It wasn’t that anything in particular was amiss–though there were small details. A light off he’d thought he’d left on that morning was off. A door ajar which was usually closed. The house seemed quiet not because there was no one there, but because someone was trying to be quiet. He tried to shrug it off, and went into the kitchen to make himself some dinner. He put one of his stockpiled frozen dinners in the microwave, turned it on, went over to find the remote, only to see a figure silhouetted in the doorway to the hallway leading towards the front of the house. He froze–the man, whoever he was, was far enough back that his face was still in shadow. Neither said anything, but Ray could hear the stranger breathing through his nose, long snorting breaths. He stepped forward, into the light of the kitchen, and Ray found himself looking at Noah.

That said, Noah wasn’t looking much like Noah at the moment. He had on a tattered and well worn football uniform, but it seemed at least two sizes too small for him. As a receiver, Noah had always been slender and quick, but his physique had shifted–his muscles had bulked up, he had a gut peeking out between the pants and jersey he had on. He was still snorting, nostrils flaring, eyeblack across his cheeks, though his entire face looked like it was smudged with dirt. Part of that was the short beard he had across his face, his hair shaggy and damp. “He…he said you’d smell good coach…” Noah muttered between snorts, “But fuck man, fuck!”

A Plea For Help (Sketch)

I don’t know what the fuck’s the matter with him. Nothing I do seems to fucking help! Ok, look, let me start at the beginning. Look, you know Jasper, you’ve known him for years, since he was a kid, hell, you’re his fucking uncle for Christ’s sake! Good all american kid, played every sport that ever existed, and was fucking killer at all of them, ever since he was five. Always working out, cared about his body, just like I raised him. I wasn’t about to have some lardass for a son, you know how I feel about fat, worthless fucks like that. No, I was gonna raise my son right.

But then, a few weeks ago, I come home from work a bit later than usual, and I come in and I find Jasper in the kitchen, standing at the fridge, stuffing his face. He was so fucking focused on eating that he didn’t even hear me come in, and he looks up with his eyes wide, something chocolate smeared around his face, and he knows I’ve caught him red handed. I tear into his ass, reminding him that his wrestling coach has ordered him to shave off two pounds so he can slip down into a lower bracket by the next Saturday, and the kid is crying–fucking sobbing really, trying to tell me that he can’t help it, and I can see his eyes flicking to the fridge, again and again, and I know he’s fucking lying to me, and it’s fucking disgusting, what I just witnessed, and I tell him I’m putting him on a strict diet from now on, that no food’s coming into my house without me knowing about it.

But fuck, if the next day I don’t come home and find him right there again, face in the fridge, stuffing himself. And I look in there, and in the freezer, and at the cans and bowls and containers littering the floor, and it’s all this shit I’d never allow in my house–ice cream, cookies, heavy cream–I don’t know where the hell he gets off, buying this shit, but I’m fucking disgusted, and I berate him again, and he apologizes, swears it won’t happen again, but fuck, every day now, he’s there, stuffing his fat face.

He sure as hell didn’t drop the pounds for that wrestling match, and I was so embarrassed to show my face there, that I didn’t even let him go–I grounded him in his room, telling him to think about what he’s done, what he’s doing to his body. I was relaxing down in the den, having a beer, when I hear something in the kitchen, and fuck if my boy’s not in the fucking fridge again, and it’s full! I threw out all the shit he’d bought, and I know he didn’t leave the house. Needless to say, I’m not fucking happy–and so I decide that if he wants to eat it, then fine, he should fucking eat it–all of it.

He keeps eating, pleading with me to help him stop. He keeps trying, and so I start, just, shoving food in the pig’s mouth as fast as I can, and fuck, if when I’m pressed up against that fat fuck, if I don’t feel his rock hard cock pressing up against my thigh, like a fucking faggot! Yeah, you can imagine how I felt about that, right? So I send him to his room again, and later, I go up to have a talk with him, and I hear him in there, fucking jacking off, fucking calling himself a disgusting, nasty pig while he’s at it…and this…I’m not proud of this. I jacked off too, listening to him. Something about listening to him humiliate himself, fuck if it didn’t turn me on something fierce, way hotter than anything that mom of his had ever done, and I can’t stop thinking about it, about that growing gut of his, about those meaty thighs, wondering how they’d look if they were…even bigger.

Look bro, I need help here. I can’t keep doing this by myself. I’ve been stuffing the pig night and day at this point, but he’s still not fucking big enough to be a proper fuck. Hey now, don’t give me that look, you don’t–no, come here! Come here and look at the fat fuck, bro! Look at your fucking pig of a nephew! Yeah, ain’t that a fuckin’ sight? Fuckin’ disgiusting. Go one, you can call him a pig, call him whatever the fuck you want, it’s just a fucking disgusting animal, a fucking toy, right? Right. See? I knew you’d understand once you saw it.

But we gotta get it bigger, don’t you think? But…fuck, it’s holes are so fuckin’ nice, bro. I can’t fucking feed it and fuck it at the same time, and it’s getting too big to feed itself at this point. So look, here’s what I propose–let’s take turns. You feed, I’ll fuck. Then you fuck, and I feed. Perfect fucking system, am I right? No, hey, calm down, I know you’re not a faggot! I’m not a fag either, but fucking a pig doesn’t make you a fag, you know that. Besides, I can see that tent there in those short of yours, you want to at least feel what it’s holes are like, right? Now come on–I’ll feed, and let you get a taste. Trust me, once you fuck this pig of mine, ain’t nothing gonna feel as good again, and with your help, we can get this nasty fuck over 700 pounds by the end of the week! What do you say? Thanks bro, I knew I could count on you–now make that piggy squeal for me, I love it when that fat faggot squeals.