Nah, that’s totally fair criticism right there. It’s something that the entire MC/TF genre falls into really easily, and it bothers me too, which is why I end up whitewashing, which is also bad, but perhaps slightly not as bad? Still bad, regardless. This whole story was intended to skewer that trope a bit, but that is not at all visible from the excerpt I included here, and is only just started to be drawn out in the longer segment in the archive.
My beef with the story wasn’t that you have included racist, white supremacist characters, there is nothing wrong with that, but the fact that each time I could have recalled black people actually appearing in your stories (admittedly I’ve missed the one you’ve linked) it was in an exclusively racially loaded setting, namely a racist person being punished by having to bottom for them like in this case or that old story about some old man, that is what I found really bothersome.
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