You hit an issue that I just don’t get within the fetish community. People within the community get upset when “vanilla” people criticize fetishist for being weird, odd, sinners, etc. Yet this happens within our community just as often. We don’t ask Vanilla people to participate within our fetish, but further I’m not asking anyone with a different fetish than I to participate in mine, nor I in yours. So why be upset or get offended. Don’t read a specific piece.–pushes soap box aside.

Well, I think that’s a bit of a scarecrow, actually. I don’t think the original asker’s concern was about fetish (or at least ostensibly) it was about story form and plot. Granted, the plot is simpler than most of the stuff I’ve written lately (not necessarily a bad thing–the commissioner asked for a TF heavy piece, so that’s what I tried to deliver) and the mood is certainly a tinge lighter than nearly everything else (as Briansite pointed out in a reply to one of my earlier answers).

Still, regardless of simplicity and mood, different stories do different things for different reasons. Still, I kind of expected that this story would seem odd to people. I haven’t posted anything furry in quite a while for one thing, and this is a lot more episodic than what I’ve written lately too. I actually broke all four parts up with captions, alternating them day by day, so people wouldn’t feel too assaulted by it.