Well, whether it’s my best work or not, it was mine. Maybe the other sections will help fill it out, or maybe it’s just not that good of a story. I can’t be on 100% of the time, and not every story is going to please every palate. The commissioner’s happy with it, I’m happy with it, and that’s enough for me.
Not that guy, but this story really did not feel like something you’d write. Sorry for overthinking porn but I think that one of the main reasons your stories are so good is the characters acting and reacting to things like real people, and this one read more like some (no offense) bad and illogical fanfiction.
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