Can I give you a top five instead?
5 – Mostly because I like the filth and implicit humiliation. The lack of any obvious MacGuffin is kind of intriguing too, and you wonder just how the son is compelling his father.
4 – You see the old addiction MacGuffin thrown around so much, but I’ve always had a soft spot for “porn” addictions. This one, I thought, was a twist I hadn’t seen before.
3 – Besides the nice AR, I’ve always liked the implied progression in this one, both the gradual progression, along with the rest of the world’s apparent ignorance to what’s happening.
2 – I can’t tell you how much I want to continue this one, but alas, time hasn’t given me the opportunity yet. I just want to see him crumble so bad.
1 – Another I’d love to develop at some point in the future. Mostly, I like this because manages to encapsulate an entire story in under 500 words. Most of these are just snippets, but this one just…pulls it off wonderfully.
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