Well, I like that he convoluted it, I think–I like a story to have a good balance between plot and porn–but, well, I think it’s become a bit muddled as of late. Regardless, feel free to expand it yourself, if you’d like! I would, but I already have too much to write.
Another guy here, I totally agree! The redneck story was so awesome and Isaiah’s wet dream was definitely among the best TFs I’ve ever read, such a shame it became needlessly convoluted afterwards with the author trying to rationalize and explain the transformations, I wish somebody expanded the alternative storyline where all three of them become forcefully changed into bear rednecks.
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