I know I gush about your work, a lot. Here’s more; I like the plot of this story a lot. I would read it as fanasy fiction! The erotic elements add, anticipation. Spudforth

Ha, “anticipation” eh? I’ve never heard it called that before 😉 

I’m glad you’re enjoying the plot though–it’s certainly the most involved (and also already the longest) thing I’ve ever written, so we’ll see if I can bring all these plot lines to bear on one another here somewhere.